|Genre||Short Story (57 pp.)|
|Keywords||Body Self-Image, Cancer, Children, Communication, Disease and Health, Family Relationships, Grief, Individuality, Loneliness, Memory, Nature, Religion, Spirituality, Suffering, Survival, Time|
Although doctors have told her that things will get better, Jyl’s odds of surviving cancer are only five percent. She lives alone in a mountain cabin and receives cancer treatments at the hospital in town. She sleeps much of the day. “Her intestines had been scalded, cauterized as if by volcanic flow” [p 67], and Jyl continues to experience problem with digestion. She feels fatigued and is easily short of breath.
Her closest neighbors are the Workman’s, a Christian fundamentalist family of seven. They live miles away in a mountain valley near the creek. Without telephone, electricity, or indoor plumbing, they live off the land and toil day and night. Jyl starts carving small boats toting messages to send down the creek for the Workman children to find. Soon 15-year-old Stephan and 7-year-old Shayna visit Jyl. The two children bring her food that the Workman’s have hunted and gathered. They cut and stack firewood for the recluse. Jyl teaches them about geology and gives them small gemstones that her father had collected. The children’s visits revitalize the ill woman.
When Stephan and Shayna do not return to see her, Jyl is overcome by loneliness. She acknowledges that being alone is far worse than any aspect of her disease and treatment. Jyl makes the difficult trek to the Workman’s property to call on the children but finds that the place is deserted. Nothing remains in their boarded-up cabin except a stack of the small boats that she had crafted. Jyl sits outside their cabin and cries. The falling snow and silence envelop everything.
The story spotlights the loneliness associated with serious illness. It also underscores the dependence of human beings on one another and on nature. Work is depicted as a fundamental activity providing purpose, sustenance, and escape. It is even a kind of religion for some people.
What is elemental? Beyond the obvious answers – rocks, water, and energy – this moving story suggests that human contact and the will to survive also belong in that category.
|Source||The Lives of Rocks (pp 67-123)|
|Place Published||Boston & New York|
|Alternate Source||Zoetrope, Volume 9, Number 1 (Spring, 2005)|
|Annotated by||Miksanek, Tony|
|Date of Entry||01/16/07|