Summary

In the first poem, Starting the I.V. (see this database) the poet tells us that he will approach the secrets of the body without flinching, "I have learned not to hesitate here, / not to let fears of my own" get in the way. The instrument he uses is the poem. Through these poems he reveals some of the hidden truth of the healing relationship. "A transformation," he calls it, "as if through this intimacy / we have become part / of each other." ("Physical Exam")

Watts captures the pain and horror of illness in striking images. For example, the numbness felt by a person suffering from multiple sclerosis "felt like oatmeal / drying on the skin" and the disease itself was "this moth of his nightmare / . . . eating at the wool / of his nerve endings." ("ms") In another poem ("restrictive") a patient's tortured breath "creaks like a tight box / a ship in a storm." Among the most remarkable of these 35 poems are "The Body of My Brother," "July 16th," "Chronic Pain Syndrome," and the exquisite prose-poem, "The Girl in the Painting by Vermeer."

Commentary

David Watts's poems are finely crafted, replete with vivid images, and alive with metaphors for the human condition. In some places his economy of language and metaphoric leaps recall William Carlos Williams: "I turn to check the woman jogger / for signs of beauty. / Just a hint of spring in this cold air." ("Late February") But these spare poems are not cold, by any means. They display a wide emotional range and buzz with energy.

Publisher

Nightshade

Place Published

Troy, Maine

Edition

1999

Page Count

50